The Anti-Michelle ([info]mrv2000) wrote,
@ 2005-01-27 16:23:00
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Fic: Love is a Many Splendored Thing
Spoilers for Pete. Dedicated to [info]nandamai. (The junkie.)

A/N: This is unbetaed so all mistakes our mine! LOL. This is a quadruple drabble. LOL.

FEEDBACK!!!!!!11!!!! LOL. Just kidding. Or not.



Sam clutched her pregnancy stick and sobbed into it while holding the tester. Why couldn't she and Pit have a baby? Was their love not meant to be? She didn't like it when he drank and hit her. She should have married Jack.

"Negative again?" Pit asked, holding a beer bottle in his hand. "I should hit you."

"Please don't Pete!" Sam cried. "I'll be pregnant next month! I promise!"

"Okay, well you better be," he said while going for another beer.

Later that day Sam went to someone's house and knocked on the door while twisting a handkerchief in one hand and clutching her purse in the other. The door opened and the occupant gasped!

It was her former CO, General Jack O'Neill!

"Hi Jack. Can I come in?"

"Sure Carter! You can come in any time and I haven't seen in you in a long time!"

"Thank you sir!"

They sat down and Jack saw the bruise on Sam's face. "Who did this to you?!" he yelled.

"I fell down. It's okay." She twisted her handkerchief in her hand. "I wanted to ask you something really important okay?"

"Sure Carter!"

"Can I have sex with you?"

"Okay."

They went into his bedroom and closed the door.

Later that month Sam held up her pregnancy stick and jumped up and down. "Look Pit! I'm going to have a baby!"

"Okay," he said drunkenly, holding a beer in his hand.

Sam patted her chest knowing that Jack's baby was growing there.

"Why are you patting your chest?"

"The baby, Pit!"

Pit hit Sam in the face again. "I don't feel like stalking you anymore. I'm leaving you, Sam."

Sam cried a lot and Pit left.

In the middle of the night Sam called Jack while crying. "Jack! Pit left me! But I'm having your baby!"

Jack whooped with happiness. "I'm coming right over!"

Jack drove really fast and came over to Sam's house. He got down on one knee and pulled out a ring that his grandmother had given him when he was five.

"Will you marry me, Samantha?"

"Yes I do! I love you and the baby!"

"I am so happy!"

"Me too!"

"I love you!"

"I love you too!"

Jack kissed her really hard and patted her chest. "Your chest is getting so big!"

"I know!"

And they celebrated by going in the bedroom and closing the door.




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[info]nandamai
2005-01-28 12:41 am UTC (link)
You love me, you really love me!

You should post this as a serious fic and see what happens. I think I can guarantee that it will get raves.

Also, HA!

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[info]mrv2000
2005-01-28 12:46 am UTC (link)
Mwah! I had to thrown in the chest thing. :D But yes. This is award winning material, baby!

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[info]nandamai
2005-01-28 12:50 am UTC (link)
OMG yes. If I hadn't sworn off the whole awards thing I'd totally nominate it for every single category! It ROKS! u r kewl.

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(no subject) - [info]mrv2000, 2005-01-28 12:51 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]nandamai, 2005-01-28 12:54 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]mrv2000, 2005-01-28 12:58 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]nandamai, 2005-01-28 12:59 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]mrv2000, 2005-01-28 01:02 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]nandamai, 2005-01-28 01:14 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]mrv2000, 2005-01-28 05:20 pm UTC

[info]mrv2000
2005-01-28 12:47 am UTC (link)
Or better yet - put it on ff.net. I'd probably get more reviews than my normal fics.

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(no subject) - [info]nandamai, 2005-01-28 01:11 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]mrv2000, 2005-01-28 01:23 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]woodface, 2005-01-28 01:41 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]mrv2000, 2005-01-28 01:44 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]woodface, 2005-01-28 01:45 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]mrv2000, 2005-01-28 01:45 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]woodface, 2005-01-28 01:47 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]nandamai, 2005-01-28 01:47 am UTC

[info]splash_the_cat
2005-01-28 01:05 am UTC (link)
Jack kissed her really hard and patted her chest. "Your chest is getting so big!"

*dies*

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[info]mrv2000
2005-01-28 01:07 am UTC (link)
Their love is so bouncy!

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[info]woodface
2005-01-28 01:31 am UTC (link)
OMG, what is happening to me? My mind didn't even pick up on that. *feels ashamed*

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(no subject) - [info]mrv2000, 2005-01-28 01:37 am UTC
*tries compensating with icon* - [info]woodface, 2005-01-28 01:41 am UTC
Re: *tries compensating with icon* - [info]mrv2000, 2005-01-28 01:43 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]woodface, 2005-01-28 01:44 am UTC

[info]cleverocity
2005-01-28 01:29 am UTC (link)
OMG this is teh best story ever!!11!

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[info]mrv2000
2005-01-28 01:37 am UTC (link)
u rok!!! :-*

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[info]woodface
2005-01-28 01:30 am UTC (link)
Me scared now.

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[info]mrv2000
2005-01-28 01:37 am UTC (link)
No you're not.

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(no subject) - [info]woodface, 2005-01-28 01:40 am UTC

[info]jerel
2005-01-28 02:26 am UTC (link)
OMG yur story is teh suxxxxx0r, cuz their iz no daniel and he rulz Jack drulz, ha ha!

(my bad speling iz pastede on yay?)

LOL! Good...bad...um, what do you say? It's supposed to be bad, and in that it succeeds brilliantly, so really, it's good.

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[info]mrv2000
2005-01-28 02:36 am UTC (link)
OMG! u r so kewl!!!

daniel iz evel but not as evel as pit!! LOL

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[info]cofax7
2005-01-28 03:48 am UTC (link)
*falls out of chair*

*is ded*

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[info]mrv2000
2005-01-28 05:23 pm UTC (link)
oh no! you fell out of chair!! :(

:(

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[info]hyari
2005-01-28 05:58 am UTC (link)
You know, I enjoyed story. And not in a badfic way.

*feels disturbed at self*
*hands in nippers card*

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[info]mrv2000
2005-01-28 05:24 pm UTC (link)
*swats*

(And OMG! The re-appearance of Hya!!)

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[info]poohmusings
2005-01-28 06:36 pm UTC (link)
Jack kissed her really hard and patted her chest. "Your chest is getting so big!"

*loves you*

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[info]mrv2000
2005-01-28 06:48 pm UTC (link)
I'll never tell Michelle.

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(no subject) - [info]poohmusings, 2005-01-28 07:00 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]mrv2000, 2005-01-28 10:04 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]nandamai, 2005-01-29 12:05 am UTC

[info]diavestra
2005-01-28 08:46 pm UTC (link)
You people frighten me.

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[info]mrv2000
2005-01-28 10:02 pm UTC (link)
Hey! I'm not the one with a tiara.

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(no subject) - [info]diavestra, 2005-01-28 10:42 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]mrv2000, 2005-01-28 11:20 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]mrv2000, 2005-01-28 11:21 pm UTC

[info]besam
2005-01-28 09:40 pm UTC (link)
Squea!!!1

He got down on one knee and pulled out a ring that his grandmother had given him when he was five.

I cried when I read this. Because that ring meant so much to him and he was saving it for her. Their love was always meant to be!

And they celebrated by going in the bedroom and closing the door.

[swoons]

U r so good! Do more!

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[info]mrv2000
2005-01-28 10:03 pm UTC (link)
*sniff* It's so beauuuuutiful!! WAH!!

:-*

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[info]angst_angel
2005-01-30 10:03 am UTC (link)
OMG, kewlest fic EVAH. I worship you. ;)

*falls over laughing*

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[info]mrv2000
2005-01-31 03:51 pm UTC (link)
I *am* the anti-Michelle! *preens*

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